The animation was great, your lines are smooth and on that front there's not really anything else that needs work. But, god, the voice acting is terrible. Not only was the voice shy and hard to hear, it being so completely ruined any humor this video would've had.
I recommend looking at some voice acting tutorials, working on emphasis, learning what separates voice acting like this and good voice acting.
You could have the funniest cartoon in the world but it won't matter if no one can hear your jokes. keep it up
christ, this was so good. it did that weird realm of anti social justice humor without being overtly stupid and political. all the jokes were very well written, and not just "fuck sjws lol!". the part where the black guy gets shot and it pans over to barricade was better. there was so many little quirks that gave the cartoon life, it reminds of tankmen, sort of.
im willing to say these are much better than any of stampers transformers cartoons
haha, i kinda liked it. a lot of the jokes fell flat, like the one where he just says "n***a" and thats the entire joke, but the part where snake goes into a trance and kojima pops up behind him was actually funny, well done
It's nothing special but it for sure isn't bad. Good work, a little laggy.
this feels more like a loading screen game, there's not much at all to it.
do you think this is a game
>doesn't get on skype for like 4 months
>still uploads songs to ng
fuck u i hate u
give him bloodshot eyes
was going to make a retarded comment but this is legitamately good
this is amazing. her aereolas look like roses btw
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